well, i guess we've come up with our final (hopefully) revision of our story. something that wouldn't be too obvious that we're telling our story. damn! that's what i'm dying to have. a jazz band. well, set in the 20's, it's obviously inspired by the lackadaisy cat strip. well, wish us luck on my literary piece (for my part that is). i hope patrick would be too kind to understand if i won't complicate the story so much. haha!!! and if there is so much cheese in it. hehe... peace on you patooom...Ü well, til on my next journal....